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Mar 07, 2010 15:44 |  #1

C&C appreciated as I am still new!!

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Mar 07, 2010 17:48 |  #2

lovely lady
nice headshot
was a simple blur tool used for her skin? if so, you're lazier than me :-)
i use layer with portraiture plug-in or retouching by hand via bluefiltered b&w adjustment layer if i am in good mood :-)




  
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Mar 07, 2010 17:54 |  #3

she is one pretty young lady! The lighting (on my monitor) appears to be just short of blowing out on her nose and forehead which caused you to lose a bit of detail there. WB also appears, (and again, could just be my monitor, but it's pretty accurate) a tad on the orangey side. Great highlights on her hair--came out great. Also, her eyes have plenty of light.

If this is a first effort, or you're relatively new to portraits fantastic effort! After another review, crop might be tight for some, but it works for me!

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Mar 07, 2010 18:35 |  #4

First - congrats on such a beautiful wife (let her know). Personally, I want her head to be turned a bit more toward the camera so that I could see a bit of white in the corner of her eye. I also wish her head was tilted ever so slightly to the camera's L. That would tilt the line through her eyes away from horizontal (giving a more dynamic pose) and would give her hair on the far side a bit of space to fall into. You'd need be careful though that the hair on the near side doesn't fall down.


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Mar 07, 2010 20:00 |  #5

Thanks for the complements guys. She's loving them.. LoL... As for a bluring tool... Yes and no... My wife has GREAT skin, but I do a slight adjustment to it. I blur then skin slightly and then I use a highpass filter to bring in the pores. Here is a link as to what I am talking about... http://www.christyschu​ler.com/retouching.htm​l (external link)

As for the lighting. I'm not seeing the blowing out on her nose and forehead as you are... Maybe I need to recalibrate my monitor.

And thanks for the insight N1as. I've been trying to work on my directing posing technique. I'm still new to all of that but I will have to keep the eyes and whatnot in mind for the next time.


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Mar 10, 2010 17:55 |  #6

Love the shot, the color, the DOF and the model.
Just one bit of critique: when doing PP be sure to soften/blur the skin in a separate layer mask and then paint back the original eyes as they are now unsharp. I bet they were sharp in the original =)




  
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Mar 10, 2010 18:00 |  #7

I agree with these guys.. I also want to ad, is that her fake smile? because she looks uncomfortable.

Pretty pretty lady.. good hair too and amazing eyes!


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