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arabinow
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Sep 07, 2001 08:52 |  #1

PLease go to my web gallery

www.pbase.com/arabinow (external link)

and look at Chloe.jpg

All Critiques are welcome, and please do so!!!!!

thanks

Adam




  
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mpkirby
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Sep 07, 2001 12:51 |  #2

I always perfer to have the image in-line.

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Its a pretty dog.

1) I like the out-of-focus background. It gives it a more intimate feeling. Just the viewer and the dog.

2) The dog isn't looking at the camera, which for this pose, I think is a good thing. I might have cropped it just a little bit more on the left. (so the head of the dog was more on the right 1/3 of the frame).

3) Note the glint in the dogs eye. Its really important to have that. You might even go to the extreme of using a very soft fill flash just to get a glint reflection in the eyes. Try it sometime. Take one with a flash, and one without. If an animal doesn't have a glint in its eyes, it look dead.

4) I wonder how it would look if the shot was a little higher, and to the right, so that both of the dogs eyes were in the frame, and there was a little less slobber in the frame.

Mike



  
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arabinow
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Sep 07, 2001 14:12 |  #3

how did you put the pic in the message??
I tried
but it didnt work?
thanks




  
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AVL_
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Sep 08, 2001 06:34 |  #4

arabinow wrote:
how did you put the pic in the message??
I tried
but it didnt work?
thanks

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(without any spaces, of course).



  
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