city shot.

So the last one I posted up they said the leading lines didn't lead to anything...so here's another shot.

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too much sky for me

I agree with smooth monkey... too much sky. I wonder how this photo would look like if the camera oreintation is landscape?

The lines do lead somwhere, but where they lead....? Not to something interesting or that makes you wonder about what is invisible. The whole image is a bit cluttered, with trees, posts, fences, cars and rubbish in the center between the tracks. The geometry from the railway tracks and the overhead support is not strong enough to take the attention away from that clutter.
Keep shooting.

I actually agree with you on the clutter and wish I could have done something about it, but I shot this while I was waiting for a train that was almost there and didn't have time to pull out a longer lens.

Here's a crop:

This one loses me on composition..

if that big rail/sign overpassish thing isn't there, I think you'd be in better shape compositionally. I find it very distracting