I just recently got back from vacation in japan. Please critique composition and post processing. I really like these 2 pics and I would like to know what others thought.
Thanks.
jonahrei Senior Member 284 posts Joined Dec 2009 Location: Oakland, CA More info | Mar 19, 2010 05:08 | #1 I just recently got back from vacation in japan. Please critique composition and post processing. I really like these 2 pics and I would like to know what others thought. 5D MK II | 7D | 70-200L F4 IS | 24-70L F2.8 | 17-40L F4 | Σ 85 F1.4 | Σ 50 F1.4 | Σ 15 F2.8 Fisheye | 2 Alien Bees 1600 | Alien Bee 400 | 580 EXII | Cybersyncs
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john-in-japan Goldmember 1,208 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2008 Location: Kamogawa City, Chiba in Japan More info | Mar 19, 2010 06:12 | #2 I like the top one. Got more? JohnW
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deathcake Senior Member  480 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: Sydney, Australia More info | Mar 19, 2010 08:21 | #3 I like them both! Great processing too, the colours in the first are rich but not over the top. Good conversion in the second, vignettes seem to work but not 100% sure. Composition is strong in both, in my opinion. [gear][recent work
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wardzach2007 Senior Member  379 posts Joined Mar 2010 Location: Houston More info | Mar 19, 2010 08:34 | #4 I like the first one.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I like the first alot.great textures and perspective.second is also good, but I think the vignette is swallowing the photo? I like the grain. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Mar 19, 2010 11:33 | #6 Thank you for the comments. 5D MK II | 7D | 70-200L F4 IS | 24-70L F2.8 | 17-40L F4 | Σ 85 F1.4 | Σ 50 F1.4 | Σ 15 F2.8 Fisheye | 2 Alien Bees 1600 | Alien Bee 400 | 580 EXII | Cybersyncs
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wardzach2007 Senior Member 379 posts Joined Mar 2010 Location: Houston More info | Mar 19, 2010 11:41 | #7 jonahrei wrote in post #9829113  Thank you for the comments.  The second pic is grainy from the nik plugin. It's the effect I was going for, but wasn't sure if it works w/ the composition. Ahhhh,, gotcha
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juxtagirl Member 185 posts Joined Jan 2010 More info | Mar 19, 2010 17:32 | #8 The first one looks like a poster. Definitely wall art worthy. Crisp, clean, well exposed and a good composition balance. Canon EOS 5D Mark II Gripped :: Canon EOS 30D :: 24-105mm f/4L IS USM :: 50mm f/1.8 :: 100mm f/2.8L Macro IS :: 3 B800's :: ABR800 w/ moon unit :: AB 42" PLM v1:: AB 86" white PLM v2 :: AB 64" silver PLM v2 :: 32x40 AB Softbox :: AB White Beauty Dish :: Metz 48AF-1 :: and a pretty Cheeky Lime bag
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Mar 19, 2010 21:00 | #9 juxtagirl wrote in post #9831452 The first one looks like a poster. Definitely wall art worthy. Crisp, clean, well exposed and a good composition balance. Thank you for such a great compliment! 5D MK II | 7D | 70-200L F4 IS | 24-70L F2.8 | 17-40L F4 | Σ 85 F1.4 | Σ 50 F1.4 | Σ 15 F2.8 Fisheye | 2 Alien Bees 1600 | Alien Bee 400 | 580 EXII | Cybersyncs
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DC5Poe Member  206 posts Joined Nov 2009 Location: Boston MA More info | Mar 19, 2010 23:25 | #10 I like #1 but the rock in the lower right is distracting 5D mk II : i7 iMac : Tamron 28-75 F2.8 : Sigma 50 1.4 : Canon 70-200 F4L IS : Canon 100mm F2.8 Macro : Yongnuo YN468
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I've only been shooting for 3-4 months, and in all honesty, I think the first pic is my best to date. I was actually thinking about printing the first one, which is why I asked for CC on them.