korrektor wrote in post #9844640
good light, but i think working on your composition is a must now. The crops are odd, cutting out limbs in the most unexpected places. You should either get closer to your models or take a step back. These are somewhere in the middle and again the way they are cropped makes them hard to look at.
I feel ya. But that's part of my style. I made sure not to cut off limbs at any joints (wrist, elbow, etc). I prefer having a crop that is "awkward" and unexpected it makes you come back to figure it out
But I do agree that the crops need some work, at least creatively speaking.
And actually, after posting that and going back and looking, I don't even know what you're talking about. Nothing is cut at any weird angle in these images. There is one on my flickr that has that, but none here. Not for nothing, but you attempted to say that my last work wasn't high key (when it was, check the histogram), now you criticize the nature of the crop when clearly it follows the "don't cut off at the joints" rule. What gives? I'm all for feedback, provided what the person says holds weight.
SonicZoom wrote in post #9843148
Very well done sir! The lighting is so smooooooth yet shows depth in their features.
I love the comedic presence in the photos too

Thanks man! I'm much more suited to do funny portraits. I feel like it would be tough for me to do something serious with a lot of emotion. For now, anyways.