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Great set but I'm not sure I'm diggin the tilted horizon on #2 or the vignette on #5, but I love 7 and 8!

I think I would straighten #2, #4 and #5. I really like #4, the group posing on #5 is nicely done and #7 and #8 are gorgeous.

5 would be a really good shot...without the vignette!
7 is v.nice indeed!

vaguelyobscured wrote in post #9874145
I think I would straighten #2, #4 and #5. I really like #4, the group posing on #5 is nicely done and #7 and #8 are gorgeous.

+1, thought the same thing throughout the whole set.

haha, i did a wedding in that same exact church about a year and a half ago!...this is in Coneticut...correct?

Sorry K-Style this is in PA. Town called Bethlehem.

I appreciate all the comments. For #5 I have non-vignette version on their website too.

I'll use 2 and 4 straightened for their album

Thanks again all, I really appreciate the feedback!

Kelly

KFormus wrote in post #9892694
Sorry K-Style this is in PA. Town called Bethlehem.

I appreciate all the comments. For #5 I have non-vignette version on their website too.

I'll use 2 and 4 straightened for their album

Thanks again all, I really appreciate the feedback!

Kelly

Yes I was looking at the shots too great job by the way and I saw the outside of the Hotel Bethlehem. Grew up in Hellertown Lots of beautiful places to shoot around there.

#7 for me

perv

#8 for me.

Loving number 8.

tilt in 2 doesn't make sense to me. pretty symmetrical picture that is thrown off by the tilt.

not a fan of the vignette in 5, especially since it bleeds onto one the the groomsmen.

he dress is totally blown out in #6 and there isn't enough light on her face.

I like #7 a lot.

Not sure about #1 as I'm now staring at something other than her face.

The angle is very disturbing in #2, it is neither here nor there in terms of the angle.

I like the concept of #8, but it appears soft or just movement blur due to a slow shutter speed.

#4 has a lot of promise. But something about the WB doesn't sit well with me.

Have I mentioned that #7 is awesome?

Thanks for sharing.

I like the light in 7. Best shot out of the group for me although I want to come in a little closer to the shot (maybe a little bit of a crop)

hey.. great work..

unfortunately no. 3 looks like she's eating flowers.. i think i know what you were trying to do on this shot but dont think it worked on this one for me

i love 2 and 4... 4 is amazing!

2 is great - love the positioning of the flower...