Please critique my newborn shot

This is my very first time attempting newborn shots, and i only took about 10 shots before:
1)she started crying as i just woke her up from a nap;
2)camera battery died.

setup considered of a black felt backdrop from a local arts and crafts store
50D, manual settings, AWB and 580ex camera mounted.

this weekend, i'm going to try again, this time with an all white backdrop with a 430ex firing into the backdrop, a 580ex mounted above right or left of the baby, with an aluminum foil reflector.

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First off, congratulations!

Second, its too dark, your setup for this weekend will prove to best this one I am sure

try to keep her asleep for a more peaceful mood. search the kids forum for "newborn" to get some ideas for posing, etc.