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Apr 04, 2010 10:26 |  #1

First, I wanted to photograph only the tree. But after a little research I found this lonely abandoned house, and this window with a view to my subject, which made a nice frame too! Hope you like it!

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Apr 04, 2010 10:30 |  #2

I like it, I think the only improvement I'd add is more contrast to the center of the photo.


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Apr 04, 2010 11:02 |  #3

lundgrenj wrote in post #9930413 (external link)
I like it, I think the only improvement I'd add is more contrast to the center of the photo.

Your absolutely right! I added a bit more contrast only to the center and it made wonders!!! Thanks!


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Apr 04, 2010 15:44 |  #4

Beautiful shot!! I can't offer any suggestions to make it better.




  
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Apr 04, 2010 18:03 |  #5

I'd say you made that lonely tree a real celebrity! Framing is a great technique.


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Apr 04, 2010 18:21 as a reply to  @ seaside's post |  #6

I love the perspective, frame in frame, and the color. The soft glow hdr look in the center doesn't do it for me though, you're hiding a better photo imo.


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Apr 04, 2010 18:42 |  #7

The soft glow hdr look in the center doesn't do it for me though, you're hiding a better photo imo.

I'll second this.
The Halo-ing around the tree is hiding a great photo from an AWESOME one.




  
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Apr 04, 2010 19:12 |  #8

I'm not seeing any soft glow halo-ing around the tree. I think it is a great image.


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Apr 04, 2010 19:33 |  #9

Love it.


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Apr 05, 2010 07:29 |  #10

Excellent, I seem to always like your stuff...so good job. :D

There is some gnarly textures on the wall that you cant quite make out. If you have a few minutes....download the photoshop plugin ReDynaMix from DCEtools and run the default settings to see what I mean.


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Apr 05, 2010 10:56 |  #11

mattaura wrote in post #9935479 (external link)
Excellent, I seem to always like your stuff...so good job. :D

There is some gnarly textures on the wall that you cant quite make out. If you have a few minutes....download the photoshop plugin ReDynaMix from DCEtools and run the default settings to see what I mean.

Im gald You like it! :D Thanks for the plugin, I tried it, and it makes the textures even more visible, but maybe too surreal too...(: Those textures are more visible on the original, but with bigger resolution!(:

Im sure, thtat I will use that plugin in the future! So many thanks for the idea, and for you comment! Have a nice day!(:


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Apr 05, 2010 12:46 |  #12

My eyes kind of hurt when I look at the tree maybe its a little too soft?


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Apr 05, 2010 12:53 |  #13

very nice shot




  
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Apr 05, 2010 14:42 |  #14

Awesome picture! loving it




  
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Apr 06, 2010 11:50 as a reply to  @ KhilkovichPhotography's post |  #15

Gorgeous..although the tree does seems eerily soft.in a good way ? Might level that horizon?


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