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Apr 04, 2010 17:28 |  #1

C&C would be very highly appreciated!

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Apr 04, 2010 19:21 |  #2

I really like the colors. I think it's very nice, not overdone




  
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Apr 04, 2010 19:32 |  #3

glick wrote in post #9932840 (external link)
I really like the colors. I think it's very nice, not overdone

thanks. i was really trying to make it look not completely ridiculous like a lot of hdrs tend to




  
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Apr 06, 2010 11:40 as a reply to  @ jcarp618's post |  #4

i like it alot. nice subtle usage to bring out the light without making it look too fake.

can i see a little ghosting on the logs or is it my imagination?




  
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Apr 06, 2010 13:46 |  #5
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It's very blurry and that's spoiling its impact somewhat. This would've worked better as a high key black and white, it's a great composition.


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Apr 06, 2010 13:52 |  #6

Looks pretty good!

There appears to be some fringing on the top of the wood pile, what looks like a thin solid color line running along the edges. I think the suggestion of doing it b/w is a great one. Overall nicely done! The sky is beautiful!


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Apr 07, 2010 22:00 |  #7

That is beautiful! Something I would definitely hang on my wall. Ghosting on the logs isn't bad for a first try... I'm still learning to avoid that too.


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Apr 08, 2010 22:28 |  #8

nice job, maybe just a tighter crop is all


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Apr 08, 2010 22:33 as a reply to  @ wolfden's post |  #9

thanks a lot guys. yea i didnt notice what was happening with the logs when working in photomatix...




  
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Apr 09, 2010 04:35 |  #10

jcarp618 wrote in post #9960659 (external link)
thanks a lot guys. yea i didnt notice what was happening with the logs when working in photomatix...

there are a few options for matching up movements in objects etc on the first screen. try playing with those and loading the same settings (if you saved them), you might be able to get the ghosting to go away really easily.




  
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