Madeline Model

This is my 1st try at Model Photography she is a friend and here we go .......

I would like full cc especially and the PP ......thanks

looks nice but there is a dirty spot on your lens on her right cheek under her eye.

^ I believe that is a small scar on her cheek

OP: Right now her lips are the focal point, which is fine
Her eyes are in fairly deep shadow.

Nice shot all and all..

Wow she is a great model! I think you did just fine with the skin and agree that the eyes do need a little sum-sum there. Know what I might have tried......the chest area is a bit bare....meaning I would have had her wear necklace of some sort. Otherwise very nice work.

Keep it up and have fun!

Tat

Great shot, but she is really, really red. I quickly took the reds out of the midtones(you'll also have to balance shadows and highlights) so you can see the difference. She kinda looks sunburnt! Also, I would try to even out her facial skintone with her body Skintone, faces is naturally a little more red than the rest of her. Once you do that, just bright her eyes a smidge, and your are gtg! Looking at it here, my side is a little too green, but you get the idea

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I love how my eyes are magically drawn to ... er ...

I agree with the above. She's looking a bit oompa loompa ish. Careful with the WB.

Thanks all you guys rock