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Apr 18, 2010 21:44 |  #1

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Apr 18, 2010 21:52 |  #2

Slightly underexposed. And the focus is all over the place. I think you have to choose...: either one tack sharp and the other flowers more or less OOF or all of them sharp. with sufficient depth of field.
For the composition I would have choosen probably more diagonal or fewer flowers.


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Apr 18, 2010 23:42 |  #3

Some thing is missing here


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Apr 18, 2010 23:54 |  #4

With a levels adjustment and some sharpening, this could be pretty cute. I kind of like how they are turning in different directions and toward one another. It is almost as if they are having a conversation.


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Apr 18, 2010 23:55 |  #5

How can focus be "all over the place"? It might not be placed optimally, but the focus plane stays in one place for one shot.

I say fix the white balance first. That is the one glaring problem I see with this shot.


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Apr 19, 2010 05:20 |  #6

Thank you all


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