One light, 16 year old model with beautiful skin and a great smile.
I made it B/W because I'm partially colorblind, and I had a feeling the original was
too reddish. I think..lol.
I would have preferred a solid blouse, but it's what she wanted.
ootsk Goldmember 1,154 posts Likes: 13 Joined Jan 2002 More info | Apr 22, 2010 23:30 | #1 One light, 16 year old model with beautiful skin and a great smile.
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DG805 Member ![]() 175 posts Joined Nov 2009 Location: Santa Barbara More info | Apr 23, 2010 00:04 | #2 looks good, but the crop seems a bit odd to me, maybe a tighter crop on the sides? her shoulders look too wide for some reason. Nikon D7000(with grip), D5000, Sigma 50 1.4, Sigma 17-55 2.8, Nikkor 18-200, Nikoor 35 1.4 G, SB600
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roman_t Cream of the Crop ![]() 5,271 posts Likes: 4 Joined Mar 2005 Location: Astana, Kazakhstan More info | Apr 23, 2010 01:56 | #3 ^^ +1
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digitalphotocandy Member ![]() 242 posts Joined Mar 2010 More info | Apr 23, 2010 07:31 | #4 The crop doesn't bother me at all. I like it a lot. Beautiful lighting ratio on the faace. template photoshop
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James P Goldmember ![]() More info | Apr 23, 2010 08:49 | #5 digitalphotocandy wrote in post #10050181 ![]() The crop doesn't bother me at all. I like it a lot. Beautiful lighting ratio on the faace. I agree. Nice lighting, great pose and I see nothing wrong with the crop. I say well done. 1Dx - 5DIII - 40D - Canon 24-70LII, 100L macro, 135L, 16-35L, 70-200 f4 and 100-400L lenses
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Apr 23, 2010 09:32 | #6 Great shot, lovely model, but I have to agree the crop could be tighter on the sides.
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daffynmark Mostly Lurking 17 posts Joined Apr 2010 Location: Central Texas More info | I think a tighter crop would be more flattering for her. Her shoulders look very wide the way it is.
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locky Goldmember ![]() 2,663 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2006 Location: Montague, Michigan More info | Apr 23, 2010 12:44 | #8 ![]() Great photo and I'm going to have to side with the others who say crop it. The reason her shoulders look wide is because her arms were not down to her side and she probably had her hands on her hips. The top of her right forearm gives the illusion that it's part of her shoulder when it is not. Would like to see more from this shoot. I just got my first pair of glasses that I didn't think I needed. I apologize to anybody in the past year that I said their pictures were out of focus lol.
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Apr 23, 2010 14:58 | #9 Beautiful shot, but I agree a bit tighter crop would make it even nicer. Jim
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ariananeal Member 36 posts Joined Jul 2009 Location: Sacramento More info | Apr 23, 2010 15:05 | #10 Just a suggestion, if you think the original is too red but you're not sure, maybe you should post it and get an opinion. Might help for later work. =)
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littleraccoons Hatchling 1 post Joined Apr 2010 More info | Apr 23, 2010 19:33 | #11 很不错,用光很到位,人物的轮廓表现的很到位
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1downfall Goldmember ![]() 4,059 posts Likes: 5 Joined Nov 2007 Location: virginia beach, va More info | Apr 23, 2010 20:23 | #12 James P wrote in post #10050541 ![]() I agree. Nice lighting, great pose and I see nothing wrong with the crop. I say well done. Agreed! I like this portrait. Bill
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Apr 23, 2010 23:55 | #13 Thanks for the input guys. Posing has always been a challenge for me.
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TBath Member 113 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: South Jordan, Utah More info | Apr 24, 2010 01:38 | #14 littleraccoons wrote in post #10053937 ![]() 很不错,用光很到位,人物的轮廓表现的很到位 Google translator says: Very good, light is in place, the outline of the performance figures are in place. 7D Gripped
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ukcyberboy Senior Member ![]() 613 posts Joined Mar 2010 Location: Liversedge More info | What a great shot, would you post the settings, I new at this so I am trying to see how others do it. Body | Canon 6D |
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