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Apr 23, 2010 00:34 |  #1
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Apr 23, 2010 01:30 |  #2

oooh pretty! I like the pollen, it looks like fairy dust!




  
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Apr 23, 2010 09:46 |  #3

Good job with bringing out those popping colors! And you got your DOF just right! Great shot!


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Apr 23, 2010 10:07 as a reply to  @ VinnieHillKovich's post |  #4

Just me, but I would rather the inner petals has been the focus and the outlaying ones blurred..?


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Apr 23, 2010 10:12 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #5

Terrific shot all around. I think the pollen makes the picture and the more crisp that is, the better. IMO.


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Apr 23, 2010 10:38 |  #6

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Just me, but I would rather the inner petals has been the focus and the outlaying ones blurred..?

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Apr 23, 2010 11:48 |  #7

Works very well for me, fabulous capture with the pollen being the icing on the flower.


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I cleaned up some of the more serious defects and it looks like many are satisfied with the "fairy dust".

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Apr 23, 2010 13:42 |  #9

Beautiful shot. I would like to have seen this with a dark/black'ish background, as well. I find that green line a little annoying. Now I'm being very nitpicky just because the overall photo is so good, though :)




  
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The green line is the stem of the flower. Feel free to edit the image PhotCupcake and show me what you would like better.




  
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Flo wrote in post #10050913 (external link)
Just me, but I would rather the inner petals has been the focus and the outlaying ones blurred..?

You can play this (focus) many ways and it just means there are many ways to play this. I made my choice and I'd like to see your choice as well. I felt that the most information about this flower was on the petals with the pollen.




  
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Apr 24, 2010 02:19 |  #12

My allergies are acting up just looking at your photo... Nice job!


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Apr 24, 2010 04:56 |  #13

Beautiful shot. Nice colours and light. However... I would have opted for a slightly wider DOF to bring at least the three "structured" petals with the pollen completely in focus.


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Apr 24, 2010 06:48 |  #14

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Should the pollen and defects in the petals be fixed to reasonable perfection? ... or ... ??

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That's a difficult call...I try to look for the "perfect" specimen what taking shots like these, but that's not always possible. Maybe a focus-stacked set of images taken at the same aperture would capture the entire flower in focus with the same out-of-focus background? The main difficulty with a focus stack is capturing each image in non-breezy conditions...


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Apr 24, 2010 11:05 |  #15

jetcode wrote in post #10054886 (external link)
You can play this (focus) many ways and it just means there are many ways to play this. I made my choice and I'd like to see your choice as well. I felt that the most information about this flower was on the petals with the pollen.

You could still have had the pollen and foreground petals in focus at the same time, no?


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