Andy & Tish

My niece and nephew
5DMII and 70-200 f2.8L, shoot-thru umbrella w/speedlite

Not sure if it's my monitor here at work, but they look overly orange.

WB looks ok from here. They look well tanned. What I see is about 1/3-2/3 stop underexposed. Fairly dark on my monitor. Could be the monitor though!

Cute couple. Nice BG, good distance between them and BG. Looks fairly sharp even with the lousy compression that comes with posting pics here!

Overall, they'll probably like it.

dave

very well done!

Yup, a bit underexposed, and could use some fill on the shadow side. I'm sure they'll like them

looks dark. I like the DOF

Definately under exposed... and aside from it being underexposed I think the glare of the sweaty forehead of the guy is a bit distracting as well. Some minor clean up in photoshop of her face, the sweat on his forehead, hitting their eyes, up, etc. woud also help out a lot.

it too looks for me slightly underexposed but it is very good portrait of a young couple

Definitely underexposed by 2/3 to 1 stop. The shot works quite well if you could adjust the exposure a bit, hopefully you shot in RAW. Also might want to clean up the hot spot on guy's forehead.

I think it's a great shot, and no way can you up it by very much before losing his white shirt.
They are a bit shiny, and good use of OCF.

Thanks for your comments and critique. I've edited it a bit and made some improvements.

Like others have said it's slightly on the dark side, but I like it, nice composition and distance from background.

I'd remove the guys blemishes near his mouth though, but thats personal preference

is image editng not ok?

ootsk wrote in post #10073408
is image editng not ok?

It's ok