in my opinion, you've got some beautiful shots and tell a great story. Only issue for me is you have too many pics. As a series I'd bet you could narrow it down to 5 really strong images and have a much greater impact - especially if you had a closeup of him testing the blade on his own head...
(Technically they're really strong. the processing technique and the sharpness of the subject/separation caused by background blur looks so good it almost feels like this was shot on film with a medium format camera.)
"Every hot girl who can aim a camera thinks she's a photographer. Oooh, you took a black and white picture of a lawn chair and its shadow and developed it at Save-On; you must be brooding and deep." – Stewie Griffin
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