2 beautiful but camera shy girls!

These girls were tough. I had lots of fun playing with them but every time I picked up the camera they turned their heads away. Couldn't get them together either. C+C appreciated.

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1: i think a little cut on the bottom could improve the picture
2: avoid cut on the hand
5: if her head was slightly turned on your direction could even improve
6: i think better avoid static shoot

However very nice and even funny series.
I love naturalness and on baby is even a must.

I love the last "rabbit" picture with her visible teeth and hair in motion.

#1 is not a great composition. Like the poster above me said - the bottom edge is really distracting.

7 is my fave.

All of them look like they could benefit from just a smidge of contrast?

The first and last is definently my favourites. I think you got some good shots here. To improve the quality it would be enough to strech the histogram, that will make the pictures less flat, give more contrast without blowing out anything.

Taking pictures of shy kids are difficult. I use my 135mm when I want to take pictures of Kids. Then I am not threatening them with my camera.