Maria

little less crop would have been better....I wish I could see the whole tattoo..other than that nice shot and pretty girl

There's only one thing stopping me from saying that I really like this image: that piece of concrete in the upper right.

I'll have to work on removing that piece of concrete.

it's part of the staircase she was under but you're right, it adds nothing to the shot.

Pretty girl, I would like to see some fill/hair light to the camera right to create more seperation.

Other then that great shot!

Nice shot, eyes look a tad over done for my taste but that is just me. Great model though.

I love the image; pose, lighting and PP. However, I do agree about the concret in the upper right of image is distracting. I would definately clone it out. Beautiful model as well.

Love the eyes, very sharp. Same feeling on the upper right corner.

Interesting model. More please.

C&C(IMHO) less crop, a little fill light for her dark hair on the right, a little more saturation on the lips to tie in the hair flower.

She seems a bit glowy. Negative clarity?

Cliff Nordman wrote in post #10139913
She seems a bit glowy. Negative clarity?

was about to ask the same thing.

In this photos, there's more detail in the wall (on the left side) than on the model. The viewer's attention will be drawn to what is most in focus and has the most detail - which will be the wall here. Too much skin smoothing.