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May 07, 2010 11:16 |  #1

Still a newbie and trying different methods and compositions... let me know what you think.

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May 07, 2010 16:00 |  #2

that bad ???


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May 07, 2010 16:14 |  #3

naw they are very nice. keep it up


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May 07, 2010 16:27 |  #4

thank you nonameowns !!!!!!

the only way to improve is knowing what I'm doing right or wrong... I appreciate your comments !


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May 07, 2010 16:57 as a reply to  @ gixxer37's post |  #5

I'm not a big fan of the first one, I think it would be wonderful if you were looking "straight on" instead of tilted to one side...it looks weird to me.

The second one is nice, I suggest a vertical crop (and more of the stem if you have it?)

The third one doesn't really have a good focal point, my eyes are drawn to the giant pink mass which seems to be closer to the camera than the droplet.

The fourth one would be very nice, if it was in perfect focus.


Sorry about being harsh. I'm not saying I could do any better, I'm just telling you what would make the pictures more appealing to ME. I like the B&W conversion on the first two, but maybe you can try brightening them up a bit?




  
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May 07, 2010 17:02 |  #6

I like the first one.
Its very nice and sweet.
Second one doesnt do much for me.
Third is kinda cool
Fourth is a little out of focus.




  
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May 10, 2010 08:09 |  #7

Thank you guys !!!! all comments and advice are welcomed and I'll put them to work for next time


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