Does the very very shallow depth of view work here? Or would it look better if the hand was in focus too? Other critique is welcome too!
polkad0t Member 141 posts Joined Jan 2009 Location: New York City More info | May 09, 2010 12:16 | #1 Does the very very shallow depth of view work here? Or would it look better if the hand was in focus too? Other critique is welcome too! http://www.flickr.com …t/sets/72157621964130533/
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dwarfcow Senior Member 640 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: South Central, Alaska More info | May 09, 2010 12:20 | #2 you should try and blow on it, and catch 1 or 2 seeds floating off in the distance (tilt shift would work awesome if you could get the seed to go into the line of focus) "Evidently the photo shop at the college I go to is one of the best in the country. They actually have a handful of digital medium format cameras for students to use; Haliburtons, or hasslehoffs, or something like that."
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | May 09, 2010 20:35 | #3 My eyes are drawn to the bright out of focus circles to the right of the subject. The background is as important as the subject.
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PBeeee Senior Member 559 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Montana USA More info | May 10, 2010 09:32 | #4 I would like the hand in focus. And the bokeh in this one is distracting. But a great composition and exposure, just a little hot on the right side of the seedhead but not to the point where I think it matters. I'd try again on the hand.
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I would crop that hand right out, the seed head and the bokeh are enough you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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canonjuke Member 94 posts Joined Apr 2010 More info | May 10, 2010 14:55 | #6 as that shot with a 50mm 1.8. that is the loook of that lens' bokeh!
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May 10, 2010 15:19 | #7 Thanks for the critique everyone! I'll attempt this again soon http://www.flickr.com …t/sets/72157621964130533/
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