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May 10, 2010 22:40 |  #2

Seems like she's afraid to let go of her hat. The b&w is my favorite, but there is some loss in detail in her hair.


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May 11, 2010 10:47 |  #3

underexposed
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needs better lighting
loss of detail in the hair
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May 11, 2010 14:07 |  #4

I wonder if you could move her further away from the backdrop... this would allow it to blur out and still keep her sharp. As it is, the tiny wrinkles in the bg keep drawing my eye and in several, it appears the bg is sharper than your model... You might want to manually focus or go to centre spot focus--to ensure her eyes are sharp. Thanks for sharing


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May 11, 2010 21:46 |  #5

I would also drop the f-stop from f/11 to low as you can go.




  
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May 12, 2010 07:41 |  #6

I like the 4 for her sweet embarrassed expression. ;)




  
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May 12, 2010 08:55 |  #7

the B+W is also my favorite. I agree with the comment about moving your model away from the background more but I would reduce the DOF more to try to eliminate the wringles in the background and to gain some separation. The dark hat also wants to blend into the background as well. Perhaps some lighting from behind would also help improve the separation. Otherwise a pretty good series. Cute expression on the model and nice poses.


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May 12, 2010 15:24 |  #8

I like the shots, especially the colors.
Agree on the remarks about the background that should be blurred.




  
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