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C&C on conversion please?

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Here's the original unedited and a second attempt at conversion:

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TxLerman wrote in post #10173388
I agree with the other comenter, I like the color version better. I would like to also make two suggestions for next time. (1) Don't frame the picture so close to the dog's mouth. It looks cut-off on the bottom. (2) Set-up the shot with a better background. The leg or frame in the background is distracting.

Thanks for the critique!

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bucket772 wrote in post #10176008
+1 on the frame in the background and the tight crop on the nose. Perhaps add a tad of black vignette to maybe isolate the dog a little?


Nice expression on the dog

Brain Mechanic wrote in post #10176033
I for one prefer the B/W version but both are nice.

Thanks for the feedback guys. Now if only my Chihuahua were so easy to shoot...

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