First Wedding

This is my first wedding, let me know what you think.
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post bigger pictures if you want them critiqued.

there, Click on them to view a larger image

first two could've used some fill light in post processing. 3 and 4 needed a reflector to get rid of the harsh shadows. Same for #6. Should've placed her in some open shade.

Over all thanks for sharing. First weddings are always hard and I haven't been brave enough to share mine yet.

Foe your FIRST wedding you've done well.

For a first wedding, these are okay. The first few look underexposed, the third one could use fill light, 4 needs to be shot with a longer lens and wider aperature, and 7 is kinda corny. I really like 5 and I think I'd like 6 more if it were cropped a little tighter.