playing with a concept

Hey y'all

I recently went on a business trip and shot this double shot.

This is supposed to be a before and after a day at work. In retrospect, I should have included a window with a dawn and dusk skies etc

But working with what I have - I created the two shots below.

Please help me develop this - I can take decent snapshots, but creating a concept, composing it and finishing it, is still a tough job for me.

Please CC on composition - arranging the two pictures etc. This is very much a work in progress that I am trying to finalize.

Thanks

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Interesting. I like stuff like this.

I wonder if you could play with the color temp to make it feel like morning and evening.

The button-down shirt in the "morning" still looks crooked and a little thrown together. I like the idea though.