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First e-shoot- San Diego Shooting Group

 
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May 17, 2010 09:29 |  #1

Here's a few from my first e-shoot ever with the San Diego Shooting Group I did over the weekend. Any C&C is appreciated.

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May 17, 2010 10:23 |  #2

him squeezing her arm makes her arm look bigger than it should be... i'm taking note of that for myself as it's always those little things that I forget


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May 17, 2010 10:29 |  #3

I think the second is really nice. Thanks for the Facebook link, hopefully I'll meet you at one of the shoots


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May 17, 2010 10:37 |  #4

sctbiggs- Haha thanks for pointing that out. Yeah I didn't even notice it as I was so drawn to their expressions. i know there are definitely many things I can improve on and am glad to hear any and every C&C.

Byran- No problem. I met Stephen recently and we had a blast just shooting around downtown. Great group of folks. Maybe I will see you at an event sometime.


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May 17, 2010 10:53 |  #5

I like the 1st and 4th. The second one is really cool, i just haven't decided on crop. I think i like it though. I would like to see the 3rd coloring on the 4th pose though.


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May 19, 2010 00:41 |  #6

any gripes on processing or composition?


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May 19, 2010 02:32 |  #7

To me, the third kindda looks like he's attacking her. Guess I'm a half empty kindda guy.

As far as composition, #4 should've had the people behind them removed and you could've moved to the right a little to avoid that bright green exit sign, which clashes with her shirt.




  
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