What do you think?

1 of 30 engagement pic im working on. so I'm just getting your opinion on this.
will post a high res if needed.
Clean, level and the usual portrait retouch...
Might be a good game also, spot the different!!!

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Nice job, though personally i'd hit her eye area with a little brightness since she's got a shadow from his face.

Is it RAW? I would up the exposure some.

seems you took off some orange color above his head... and added vibrance to the greens in the grass and trees.

I agree with the others in bumping up the exposure .5 or so... also if done in raw i would drop the exposure to get some of the detail in the sky back and then merge the different exposures. i see you did it a little and got some of the blue and branches back, is that as far as you can get it?

overall nice.. just a few tweaks and you got it..

i really like the skin tone of the original...

Looks like you amped up the clarity/vibrancy/sat in the after pic
And you cleaned up his face a little