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Couple of landscape/surf shots

 
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Jun 03, 2010 04:07 |  #1

Hey guys, first post on this wonderful forum! Just wondering what you thought about em

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Jun 03, 2010 09:37 |  #2

They are quite dark?

First I would crop out the top of the frame, keeping the big waver and the folks..and up the exposure.

#2.again, dark

#3,4 have sensor dust galore..I like the last , but a crop would help.and GND.


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Jun 03, 2010 10:44 |  #3

Be careful shooting surf. The abundance of white will coax your camera's meter to make it 18% gray.

In the last one, the out-of-focus bush on the left detracts from the image. It also protrudes to far toward the center to serve as a pleasing frame. The thing in the top right corner is worse.


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Jun 03, 2010 14:08 |  #4

First 3 are dark
Check this for inspiration, this is my buddy from home
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Theres an "oceans" section. hes a surf photog mainly


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