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Jun 07, 2010 07:03 |  #1

I'm practicing my off camera lighting and poses. My girlfriend offered to help me out and pose as the model this time.
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Jun 07, 2010 13:20 |  #2

Is it that bad?



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Jun 07, 2010 13:42 |  #3

Not at all. Lighting is solid, although there is a bit of loss in and around the boots. For some reason I feel the crop is a little tight to her boot at the bottom but thats just me im sure.


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Jun 07, 2010 13:45 |  #4

I agree with the comment on the crop and I believe that a slightly brighter exposure to reveal details in the hair, legs and boots would have made it more effective.


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Jun 12, 2010 11:46 |  #5

Duly noted. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll have to sere if I can bump the exposure in the blacks a bit...unfortunately the crop is how it was shot



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