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Jun 12, 2010 01:48 |  #1

I tried out a new editing process and I'm trying to get some feedback - good or bad... images are links to flickr for larger viewing.

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Jun 12, 2010 01:50 |  #2

Her teeth leap out of the photo at me - they're perhaps a little white :D




  
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Jun 12, 2010 01:58 |  #3

promise I didn't brighten then that much, they are/were pretty bright already, I just cleaned them up a little :)


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Jun 12, 2010 02:10 |  #4

You must have used the "make teeth too white" tool. ;-)a

Otherwise the pictures are good.


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Jun 12, 2010 02:20 |  #5

TBath wrote in post #10347618 (external link)
You must have used the "make teeth too white" tool. ;-)a

Otherwise the pictures are good.

I guess I need to find the "make teeth not so white" tool haha

I toned them down a bit, hopefully a bit better now?

And thanks for the feedback :)


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Jun 12, 2010 02:31 as a reply to  @ alsoscott's post |  #6

I think the faces are brushed too much and looks a little soft, they're missing a little detail. But great photos!




  
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Jun 12, 2010 03:12 as a reply to  @ gnaw's post |  #7

The images are nice, but the subject is way over processed IMO.


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Jun 12, 2010 04:28 |  #8

drdiesel1 wrote in post #10347723 (external link)
The images are nice, but the subject is way over processed IMO.

I agree with the above sorry. I really like them other wise. The second one being my favorite.


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Jun 12, 2010 05:56 |  #9

I like the second one, although it does make me want a Mentos for some reason...:)


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Jun 12, 2010 10:47 |  #10

too much pp.


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Jun 12, 2010 11:15 |  #11

Thanks all for the input, I'll see if I can tone them down a bit. Thanks a bunch!


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Jun 12, 2010 11:24 |  #12

after a quick look back in Lightroom, I think some of the loss of details, and the over processing look actually came from too much noise reduction within LR... I go back to the RAW file and reduce the noise reduction and some of the details come back into the face and skin...


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Jun 12, 2010 12:38 |  #13

i like posing and compositions but as other said it looks over done a bit


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Jun 12, 2010 21:18 |  #14

Was the second one shot in Fayettville?




  
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Jun 12, 2010 21:28 as a reply to  @ jhuse's post |  #15

The second one is my favorite, but full size I see lots of bad artifacts in her hair and aliasing artifacts on her arms. Her eyes look over-processed. They really detract from an otherwise well composed photo of a very attractive and photogenic young woman.


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