second wedding, first with 5d mkII

I like the first on. A lot, actually. The second one seems out of focus to me, and although I can see that it might have been hard to bounce flash, it would be easy to compensate for that lighting in post. The last one is nice, but I would have loved to see you shoot it from a slightly higher angle, where the sun was just blocked by their faces. That should have produced a nice outline and an intimate view of the couple's actual face. That is just preference though, because it is well composed as is.

Good works..
But, for my taste the vignetting PP is overly done..

mritchy i actually did shoot a few like that, i was having a hard time getting a good exposure on the faces, this one imo turned out better so i put it up.

#2 is a little out of focus, the focus fell largely on the floor and the train, but still soft. i thought it gave it fun touch.

as far as the vignette it can get a little overwhelming, these are a few of the versions i edited for them, so they still have the original photo with the natural vignette before i toyed with it in curves.

it was my first time using a speedlite, and i had only had the full frame for about a week, it was a good mess to throw myself into, sink or swim mentality i suppose.

FYI these were all shot with the 24-70L

The vignetting really works well for #1. Not so much on the others.