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Jun 21, 2010 21:10 |  #1

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Amber is a co-worker's daughter. We got together, did some simple portraits and had a great time! Very photogenic girl.

Please C&C, harsh or not, anything goes ... Thanks for looking!


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Jun 21, 2010 21:14 |  #2

cute girl..over exposed...nasty nails ruins it for me




  
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Jun 21, 2010 21:22 |  #3

The nails are just way too much.


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Jun 21, 2010 23:24 |  #4

Beautiful image, great pose, lighting is good but a bit light (could be my monitor), lovely senior, incredible eyes and PP good. However, the nails are a bit gross but beyond your control. Let's face it, you have to give the client what she/he wants even if it's distracting to others. I am sure your client will love the image. Great work!


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Jun 22, 2010 08:50 |  #5

georgebowman wrote in post #10404524 (external link)
Beautiful image, great pose, lighting is good but a bit light (could be my monitor), lovely senior, incredible eyes and PP good. However, the nails are a bit gross but beyond your control. Let's face it, you have to give the client what she/he wants even if it's distracting to others. I am sure your client will love the image. Great work!

Thank you

I agree on the nails. But like you said, to each his/her own.


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Jun 22, 2010 10:58 |  #6

georgebowman wrote in post #10404524 (external link)
Beautiful image, great pose, lighting is good but a bit light (could be my monitor), lovely senior, incredible eyes and PP good. However, the nails are a bit gross but beyond your control. Let's face it, you have to give the client what she/he wants even if it's distracting to others. I am sure your client will love the image. Great work!

I'll echo these comments and also mention there seems to be a slight WB issue, but I don't have a calibrated monitor.

I'm sure she'll love the shot.


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Jun 22, 2010 14:33 |  #7

The left side of her face is a bit soft for me personally (could just be my eyes) and the nails are hideous ;) but the photo is good, she has very pretty eyes.


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Jun 22, 2010 15:45 |  #8

Cute girl and a nice pic.
I'd probably use a lil recovery to get rid of the hot spots on her face, elbow and hand. She also looks a lil orange.


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Jun 23, 2010 06:04 |  #9

The shot seems slightly overexposed and the white balance is just a bit too orange on my calibrated monitor. Could you have used a custom white balance for this? Over all, the shot looks pretty good, but if you use a gray card, you could set your exposure and WB off of it.


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Jun 23, 2010 06:48 |  #10

I used a whibal card and had to adjust even more after that. She does a lot of tanning so she actually is orange. haha

I'll do a re-edit tonight and fix the exposure/hot spots and white balance ... and i'll post again

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Jun 23, 2010 06:50 |  #11

I liked it. Thanks for sharing ! :)


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Jun 23, 2010 20:57 |  #12

As other have said, too much flash and over exposed. Her skin is also rather red.




  
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Jul 08, 2010 13:58 |  #13

you captured here great smile!


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