Photoshoot C&C Please

My wife has wedding planning business and she recently set up a photo shoot, graciously letting me photograph it. I'm still pretty green and haven't shot a wedding yet other than as a guest so any constructive criticism on these images would be much appreciated. I'm still struggling with composition, usually realizing when I'm going through my images afterwards that I should have adjusted my shot a bit.

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good lighting and exposure, but the positions aren't to flattering for the bride....

Yes, I think you got to work on positions. Otherwise great job.

I think #1 is fine and perfectly flattering. It is pretty green though, and take it easy on the vignetted corners. #2 is very magenta. If you compare them, it's obvious. #2 is just .. an outtake? I don't get why you would ask for CC on that one at all.

both images are very clean,dont like the 2nd at all,and the 1st dont do much either colors look nice though thanks for sharing.