New Flash Set-up

Hi there. I haven't posted here in a while, but now that I have more time on my hands I started to get back into photography. I bought a set-up to use my Speedlite 580EX with a unbrella and stand. I got it at Samy's Cameras. It is the rps studio wireless speedlite trigger kit which came with a 6ft stand, an umbrella and the wireless trigger set. So here are some pics I shot today. Give me some feed back if you can.

These were shot with a Canon 10D with ISO 400
Settings: F-Stop 11 Exp: 1/90 with automatic white balance.

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The right side of her face in the last image isa bit dark for me, could do with some fill light, a reflector (even a sheet of white polystyrene) might help to balance it if you've only got 1 light

Nice shots. The stairs shots seem cropped a little tight, imo. The last picture is very good.

Thanks everyone!

@Apeman, I did have a reflector but I guess it wasn't angled correctly and i had to prop it up on a box.

@DanThoman, Should I have a bit more stairs showing?