I brought a darker exposure through and added a light sky replacement. Skies were completely clear when I took the photo.
I brought a darker exposure through and added a light sky replacement. Skies were completely clear when I took the photo.
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Jun 12, 2015 07:31 | #7127 rgs wrote in post #17593703 Not sure it looks blurry, but it does look a bit flat. I think I would lighten it up a bit and maybe boost the whites even more. I would like that white trim to be quite a bit brighter than the off white walls. As much as I like EF, it does tend to produce flat results. The new LR 6 HDR seems less inclined to do that. Didnt have LR6 when I did this, do now, I do like the output from LR6, just wish it would allow you to run it against multiple stacks... EOS 6d, 7dMKII, Tokina 11-16, Tokina 16-28, Sigma 70-200mm F/2.8, Sigma 17-50 F/2.8, Canon 24-70mm F/2.8L, Canon 70-200 F/2.8L, Mixed Speedlites and other stuff.
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i_am_hydrogen Goldmember More info | Jun 12, 2015 20:33 | #7128 flickr
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KenS. Senior Member More info | Jun 12, 2015 21:28 | #7129 Image hosted by forum (732406) © Ken S. [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Fuji XH1
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TRhoads Cream of the Crop More info | Jun 13, 2015 07:17 | #7130 I wish the sky in Chicago looked like that right now... Been here 2+ days and it's been overcast and raining! Website
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Jun 14, 2015 17:57 | #7131 Looking for some C&C Image hosted by forum (732722) © DisrupTer911 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Image hosted by forum (732723) © DisrupTer911 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. www.vividemotionphotography.com
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dandingo Senior Member 321 posts Likes: 32 Joined Aug 2012 Location: SoCal More info | Cool little condo in SoCal.
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Your lines are straight, but the strong warm cast on the left side of the image is distracting. If you could match the temperature of the left side of the image to the right, I think you'll have a much more effective image. Additionally, you could improve the focus by cropping out a significant amount of the ceiling. Liam - A7r, Fuji x100, 450d and some other stuff. --- Flickr
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Jun 14, 2015 20:02 | #7134 Are these the merges right from LR or did you work them over a bit post merge? Did you merge all 7 brackets? I evaluate each bracket and only use the ones needed. I also try to use adjacent brackets and don't skip any. Most of my shots actually use 4 or 5 - rarely more and sometimes as few a 3. In this case I think you are using too many light brackets because your lamps are too hot. This usually indicates that you have so much blown out data that it's bleeding into adjacent areas. Canon 7d MkII, Canon 50D, Pentax 67, Canon 30D, Baker Custom 4x5, Canon EF 24-104mm f4, Canon EF 100mm f2.8 Macro, Canon EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5, 70-300mm f/4-5.6 Di VC
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Jun 14, 2015 20:27 | #7135 hi RGS & Luxury, Image hosted by forum (732744) © DisrupTer911 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. www.vividemotionphotography.com
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Your horizontal is a big improvement and the hot bright spots are under control. The wall sconces are greatly improved. I would simply open the shadows - slightly - and you have a very good image. The towels don't bother me. They look very neat. Some don't like things like that and others do. I don't think you'll find a consensus so you consult with your client and use your best judgement. Canon 7d MkII, Canon 50D, Pentax 67, Canon 30D, Baker Custom 4x5, Canon EF 24-104mm f4, Canon EF 100mm f2.8 Macro, Canon EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5, 70-300mm f/4-5.6 Di VC
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Jun 14, 2015 20:54 | #7137 The wall to the right and the door and handle don't bother you? www.vividemotionphotography.com
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Jun 14, 2015 20:58 | #7138 DisrupTer911 wrote in post #17597157 The wall to the right and the door and handle don't bother you? That's why I went vertical. to eliminate that. Perhaps though, from a non-photographic-critque the door/handle is normal to us and the regular joe investor won't care because they know rooms have doors and handles? Not the door handle. The black band can be cropped and, if you want to maintain a horizontal (rather than a vaguely square) shape, you can still crop the ceiling to the top of the shower door. Canon 7d MkII, Canon 50D, Pentax 67, Canon 30D, Baker Custom 4x5, Canon EF 24-104mm f4, Canon EF 100mm f2.8 Macro, Canon EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5, 70-300mm f/4-5.6 Di VC
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Jun 14, 2015 21:06 | #7139 How do these look now? Image hosted by forum (732751) © DisrupTer911 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Image hosted by forum (732752) © DisrupTer911 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. www.vividemotionphotography.com
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I would bring the brightness of the first image down a stop, it seems a little washed out. The colour is a big improvement though. Liam - A7r, Fuji x100, 450d and some other stuff. --- Flickr
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