First Wedding: Sean & Tina

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These are very good quality shots, however I'm not too keen on number one, looks are little dark on my screen.
2, 3 are fantastic.
4 slighty underexposed And colours look a little flat, so an easy fix.
5 is beautiful.
Not too keen on 6 but a nice warm solemn expression.
6b - 12 are all very good.

Wow! These are really nice - until I got up to #12. Gee - wasn't there a better background than a refinery?!!! Unless he/she is the owner of course...

But seriously, #5 would have to be my favourite. The soft light is beautiful.

ken.

Not bad for your first time, nice DOF.

1 - Underexposed.

2 - Fine, sweet moment.

3 - Solid shot

4 - Underexposed

5 - Needs some fill, and to edit her undereye circles.

6 - Too dark.. I know the light was uneven, but I would brighten it up a bit.

6b - I would take some of the yellow out.

7 - It's okay

8 - Great moment, but a bit underexposed.

9 - I dig the framing but the light is harsh.

10 - Relaly harsh and uneven light

11 - I dig the idea but the couple is lost in the photo for me, due to the lighting.

12 - I don't mind the background, I think it's kind of cool, but I dunno, I think a full shot of the couple would have been better.

BTW - You are going to get yelled at for embedding more than 8 images.. Dem's da rules, you know.

First great shots! second one thing living in a city is you get to go through and edit out graffiti on stuff. i would like to see that gone off the back of the bench in #11. Makes the picture nicer you could say.

Thanks guys for all the feedbacks! Ill be sure to incorporate some of them into my next wedding in August

Oh and the Refinery is actually a famous landmark in Seattle, WA
There was not much I could do because the park was filled with people. There was like 4 people in #12 I had to remove in Photoshop. Thank god for CS5

great series and excellent work, but almost *all* of them look underexposed

I seem to be getting a lot of 'underexposed' feedbacks. Im going to look at these on another monitor to see find out myself. Thanks again guys, keep them coming
Or I just love shadows?

were you not allowed to use flash at the venue? Many of the shots look good but could benefit from some bounced flash for fill light.

I did use bounced flash but I did dialed down the Flash Exposure Compensation so that it would not overpower ambient. Unfortunately, this technique is not perfected yet, I get some shot with nice shadow and some with very harsh shadows.
Back to practice some more
And I also used cheap lithium ion AAs for my Speedlites, another reason why some shot did not get the fill flash

Moderator's Note: I linked images after 8, as that is all that you can have in a thread. Please review the IMAGE POSTING RULES. The 6b I left as 7.

The white balance in those dark chapels is hard to deal with.