Am I doing it right?

I usually shoot Nighttime events so I felt a little out of my element when the sun was out

Did I get the daytime fill flash right here?

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Your lighting looks good to me

I agree - the lighting seems fine. However, I find your DOF a little distracting. Her hair (the little that's there ) is OOF, even the highlight on her forehead. I know that's not what you asked for, but something I did notice.

pelooyen wrote in post #10562524
I agree - the lighting seems fine. However, I find your DOF a little distracting. Her hair (the little that's there ) is OOF, even the highlight on her forehead. I know that's not what you asked for, but something I did notice.

How did you even notice her hair here

LOL @ the hair comments

Not sure about the DOF
I guess Ill chalk that up to the crappiness of the kit lens (18-55mm f/3.5-5.6) or maybe my shutter speed was just too slow *shrug*
Here is the Exif:
Exposure 0.025 sec (1/40)
Aperture f/7.1
Focal Length 25 mm
ISO Speed 200


Thanks for the input on the lighting!!!