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Jul 21, 2010 12:25 |  #16

The one sitting on the rail is my fav as well...however your PP is a bit overdone. Sometimes we tend to overdo PP when it just doesn't seem right with the standard corrections we make on most shots. There comes a point when you have to just tell yourself..."Done!"


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Jul 21, 2010 16:09 |  #17

I like the PP in general, the warm tones really add atmosphere. Having seen the original now I think she might look better cooled down a little (keeping the background warm) and that would probably help with the separation of her hand from the background.

I'd also prefer a little space below her in the frame too as mentioned by a previous poster. It's a great shot though.




  
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Jul 21, 2010 22:30 |  #18

Well thanks you everyone. I took the suggestions and spent a few minutes with the other photo.

Please let me know what you think. as suggested I straightened it, cropped it and toned it down from the othere PP I did.

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Jul 22, 2010 10:57 |  #19

Nice shot... Just a small nit. I think you shot this too close to the bottom of her feet so there is no foreground. With her looking down, it leaves me wondering what she is looking at.


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