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My first lightning capture!

 
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Jul 24, 2010 03:55 |  #1

Using DSLR Rebel w/ 18-55 lens

Shot using 25 sec shutter and 3.5 aperture.

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Jul 24, 2010 04:21 |  #2

Really love the colours in this.

About the only thing I'd do is to crop it a bit to get rid of some the wasted space.


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Jul 24, 2010 04:22 |  #3

philwillmedia wrote in post #10593953 (external link)
Really love the colours in this.

About the only thing I'd do is to crop it a bit to get rid of some the wasted space.

Thank you!!! Was thinking about cropping out the bottom and maybe a little bit of the sides.


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Jul 24, 2010 04:51 |  #4

IMAGE: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c303/winters19/lightningraw-1.jpg

Cropped and reduced noise.

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Jul 24, 2010 05:43 |  #5

i liked the reds in the first one... they seem to have gone in the 2nd one :(




  
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Jul 24, 2010 06:06 |  #6

Flores wrote in post #10594078 (external link)
i liked the reds in the first one... they seem to have gone in the 2nd one :(

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I liked it to. Hows this one?

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Jul 24, 2010 07:29 |  #7

Last one too edited, you lost the lightning definition


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Jul 24, 2010 07:35 |  #8

I liked the first cropped version the most. In the second one the colors are too saturated to my taste.
But overall good effort!


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Jul 24, 2010 08:04 |  #9

Looks good :)

Well done - but I'd crop it a bit - and I like the colours in the first one.


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Jul 24, 2010 08:18 |  #10

IMAGE: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c303/winters19/lightinigraw3.jpg

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Jul 24, 2010 08:28 |  #11

whichever of those are wicked awesome :) I would like to capture lightning also hehe


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Jul 24, 2010 17:12 as a reply to  @ monk3y's post |  #12

I like the last one the best so far, but I would still try and do a tighter crop on it, the colors look the best in the last, as well as the treeline , now ytou just have to get the framing a little tigher, and you'll have a great photo......
Not that it's bad now, but a tighter crop would help it a little.....


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Jul 24, 2010 20:26 |  #13

I like it but looks as if a longer lens would have helped on this occasion.


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Jul 24, 2010 20:38 |  #14

corkneyfonz wrote in post #10597146 (external link)
I like it but looks as if a longer lens would have helped on this occasion.

but that is very difficult to do with lightning though...


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