Here is my second try my arms seems to be way more in focus than my first one and i tend to like this one more
Keny,
Since this is the "Self-Portrait" thread, I would like to say "Good Job", or at least "better job" now that it is closer to being in focus. A little more work and, perhaps, a bunch more shots and you'll find one that is tack-sharp that will be a real winner. I know I personally find it EXTREMELY difficult to do self-portraits and get them in focus.
The trick I use is a remote, which transmits the shutter half-press. Then I can sit in front of the camera with a small enough aperture and (hopefully) the auto-focus point lined up with my eyes and press the remote. I make sure to do this in such a way that the camera can focus first, then take the picture. I repeat this MANY times, shifting slightly between takes. That way, I am more likely to find a shot that was right on the mark.
Now, to address something that is un-related to the thread, but brought up in your post. I looked at your website and you seem to be serious about your photography and doing it as a business. With that in mind, I have a couple questions/suggestions:
Is English your first language? Not meant to be in any way a slam, but I noticed a few grammar mistakes on your opening page. I also noted where you were from and figured this could be due to French being your first language. No problem, just find someone you can trust to proof your pages so that you present the best possible image for your potential clients.
Speaking of image, might I suggest you find a better background for your website image? The one you selected for this shot has a lot going on in the background and it takes away from the item of interest... YOU! The blue shed, the electrical lines on the roof of the house, the three different types of blocks you are sitting on, they all detract from you.
As far as you are concerned, I would also suggest pulling your pants up and loose the glasses. I know, it's the style and, depending on your customer base, that may be EXACTLY what you want to show, but I think for most customers, they want to see a relaxed, confident, competent, "professional" and the baggy pants do not always portray that image. For a lot of people, the sunglasses make it hard to connect with the person. They want to be able to see the eyes. Again, I am not trying to beat you up in any way. I like the image, and I like the look. I am just speaking as part of an older generation and in your best interest with regards to your photography business. Did you notice I never mentioned putting on a suit and tie or anything like that. I am a firm believer in a "relaxed" attitude and I think you should portray that in your website's self-portrait. Just don't relax it too much.
I know others will be inclined to comment and agree or disagree, but I want to apologize for hi-jacking the thread and try to prevent keeping it from going in the wrong direction. PM me with any questions/suggestions you have and I'd be happy to discuss them. In fact, we could continue the dialogue by posting the image in the business section and discussion whether or not it would make a good image for a business website. At least that way, we don't take away from all these other great images.
OK, I am finished with my opinion and it is just THAT, my opinion. Keep trying and you'll nail the self-portrait. I'm looking forward to seeing it when you are done!
