I finally tried

Did some portraits this weekend.
PLease help me get better with your CC, Thank you

Exposures look good.
My only comment is on cropping or framing, which ever the case may be.
Try and follow the rule of 1/3rds.
Dont chop off body parts. Image #2 would have been right on par with the exception of the end of her hair is chopped and last image could have been a bit wider showing to the shoulder on the left and the ends of the fingers on the right. There is more space between the subject on the right and the end of the frame and the subject on the left and the end of the frame.

Beautiful Girls! Nice catch light in the eyes that could have been a little better in the last shot. Rule of thumb is to try and get the catch lights in the eyes at the 11 oclock or 1 oclock position.

overall though great photos!

I really like #3, the lighting and colours look great to me.

Thank you for your comments.
In 2..well the hair was out of the picture, and in the last one i did the crop, but next time will be more carefull
Thanks

no 3 look good to me ...............nice picture