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Please sirs...and Madams...May I have some critiques?

 
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Aug 03, 2010 21:56 |  #1

Please give me you opinions..........


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Aug 03, 2010 21:58 |  #2

On what?


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Aug 03, 2010 22:02 |  #3

It's slightly cold on my monitor, other than that there isn't really anything to critique, it's a fantastic shot.


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Aug 03, 2010 22:11 |  #4
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There are some great qualities to this image. The composition is good, the models makeup and bikini colors are complimentary to colors in the surrounding environment. The lighting is excellent. I think something you may consider is having your model relax her jaw and show some teeth. It often makes for a more natural and open pose. Also notice that her furthest arm is protruding from her back and while we may miss this the first time on subsequent viewings it will become apparent.




  
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Aug 03, 2010 22:14 |  #5

Color balance looks all wrong on my monitor.


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Aug 03, 2010 22:19 |  #6

my monitor makes her look like a baked lobster! love the overall shot though!




  
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Aug 03, 2010 22:21 |  #7
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jgrussell wrote in post #10657623 (external link)
Color balance looks all wrong on my monitor.

How so for my own reference? I see some light sky blue in the water and fairly warm skin tone but it doesn't look all that bad on my monitor. I am wondering if the OP used a tungsten light source rather than a daylight balanced light source.




  
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Aug 03, 2010 22:21 |  #8

Yeah, color is off on my calibrated monitor as well, she looks a bit red/orange.


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Aug 03, 2010 22:23 |  #9
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Skrim17 wrote in post #10657677 (external link)
Yeah, color is off on my calibrated monitor as well, she looks a bit red/orange.

I see that as well. It looks like the color is a bit saturated.




  
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Aug 03, 2010 22:31 |  #10

my monitor has it balanced....I did use auto white balance in the shot....


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Aug 03, 2010 22:34 |  #11

switchblade5984 wrote in post #10657659 (external link)
my monitor makes her look like a baked lobster! love the overall shot though!

Same here on a calibrated monitor.


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Aug 03, 2010 22:37 |  #12

sorry, i don't like it.


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Aug 03, 2010 23:22 as a reply to  @ fontanka's post |  #13

Besides the color issue, she need to smile :D She looks pissed off :lol:


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Aug 04, 2010 00:42 |  #14

She does look a tad reddish orange, but I like the pop of the moss behind her. I think its a decent pic overall. Though, I would suggest a reflector behind her and pulling out a bit so as to not cut her off at the ankle. For the model, the left hand is a bit distracting and as jetcode said having her be more natural with her jaw would be nice.


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