My Wife

First portrait attempt....
Natural light. EOS40D, 85@2.2, ISO800
The focus is on the gold ring.

C&C always welcomed.

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Many thanks.

Felix.

My name is Felice, but you can call me Felix...
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You have what appears to be a very attractive wife, but this shot does not seem to flatter her. Her chin is tucked making her look like she has a double chin.

EOSFelix wrote in post #10660943
The focus is on the gold ring.

C&C always welcomed.

The focus point may have been on the ring, but the pose and composition do not really "focus" the viewer on the ring. My eyes are drawn to the hair near her ear. Either try another pose/composition or even better would be to focus more on her eyes, and get both of them in to the frame.

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moeronn wrote in post #10661201
You have what appears to be a very attractive wife, but this shot does not seem to flatter her. Her chin is tucked making her look like she has a double chin.
The focus point may have been on the ring, but the pose and composition do not really "focus" the viewer on the ring. My eyes are drawn to the hair near her ear. Either try another pose/composition or even better would be to focus more on her eyes, and get both of them in to the frame.

Hello moeronn,
many thansk for your seggestions! I'll follow in the next attempt.

Bye,
Felix.

My name is Felice, but you can call me Felix...
CanonEOS5DIII | CanonEOS6DMarkII | Panasonic LumixG9 | Panasonic LumixGX8
Tam24-70 f/2.8 | Canon EF17.40 f/4L | EF70.200 2.8L II | Tam75-300 f4/5.6 | Leica Lenses for Lumix | Canon 580EXII | LoweProClassifiedAW160 | NG2140 |

armskhatri wrote in post #10741366
Beautifully angled

Hello armskhatri, many thanks for your comment! I appreciate e lot.

Bye,
Felix.

My name is Felice, but you can call me Felix...
CanonEOS5DIII | CanonEOS6DMarkII | Panasonic LumixG9 | Panasonic LumixGX8
Tam24-70 f/2.8 | Canon EF17.40 f/4L | EF70.200 2.8L II | Tam75-300 f4/5.6 | Leica Lenses for Lumix | Canon 580EXII | LoweProClassifiedAW160 | NG2140 |