1st Attempt @ Digital Double Exposure

This is my first attempt at a double exposure with a digital camera. I did doubles years ago with my Canon A1.

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I think it looks good technically (aside from her dress being really hot) but... in concept and in effectiveness, I just don't think it works. It looks like they're queuing to.. kiss... each other... after they're done... kissing.. each other?

I mean you photoshopped well, but as a wedding photograph I would say it was lackluster at best. I don't like how the arch is chopped off. Chairs and people in background are distracting. Colors seem very bland. 90% of the detail in her dress is lost because it was not exposed properly. The technique itself just doesn't seem to work here artistically.

IMO, double exposures are just too gimmicky and done to death.