HeaTransfer wrote in post #10718916
Of all the shots, I think #5 is best. I think it might work well with a rectangular crop that cuts off the bottom of the photo and emphasizes the sign (maybe re-frame this one to provide some extra space on top of the building). I also think #1 is an interesting perspective.... if you can move your shooting position such that you can:
- see the entire building
- still catch some of the sky (nice color catch here btw)
- avoid getting that distracting foreground in
you'll have a better photograph.
When you took these photos, did you stop and try to figure out what you wanted to portray, before pressing the shutter? I often find that it helps when I stop and think before I shoot.
Anytime you've a long exposure you'll want a tripod (or somewhere you can set your camera down). Check your white balance. It's off in all photos except for the last one... if you shot RAW it's a snap to fix in post.
Most of the shots are overexposed - check out the area underneath the awning of the main building, for instance, or the bottom of the "Southlake department of public safety" sign.
Thanks for the input ... I was shooting from a parking garage from a ways away so that is about the only angle I could get while shooting number 1
The lack of zoom I had made it to where I could not cut out most of the foreground stuff. So I just tried to make it look as nice and intentional as possible.
Ok I will take a look at the white balance on them and see what I can do.
buurin wrote in post #10721117
#1 The composition could be better. Id prefer the subject(the building) fill more of the frame. Also I'd rather see the building at a different angle. You have a green bar in the bottom left of the image. I was basically told you need to look at each element in your composition and ask yourself does it contribute to the story the photo is telling? If not then its distracting.
Ya the green bar is actually the cement barrier of the parking garage I was shooting on. I will edit that out. I only had an 18-55mm and a 50mm lens so that was fully zoomed in with my 18-55.
#2 Lots of overexposure on key elemnts of the subject, the 2nd floor windows. I also feel like the white balance could be cooled down a bit. Its pretty yellow. It also might need to be rotated a tiny bit. I feel like its slanted.
ok I will look into that. The building had very bright lights though haha 
#3 is lacking an obvious subject. The brush in the foreground is distracting if the intent was a skyline type of view.
Eh, I was just taking a picture of the parking garage I was shooting from so you could get a feel of how far it was away.
#4 The statues are underexposed, but if you exposed them correctly then you'd overexpose the building. Id maybe use flash to bring up the exposure on the statues. Theres some distracting foreground elements.
Yep I had a real problem with the lighting on the statues compared to the building.
#5 Exposure is off. Id expose so you could read the text on the building. Watch for the cropped flags on the right.
I tried to get it exposed to where you could read the text. Just could not get it. They have running lights right under the text so it was extremely bright from the lights being so close.
#6 The white balance seems better here. Id maybe warm this one a tiny bit. You have an obvious subject here, but its boring.
Overall I think you should think about composition. Look all around the frame and ask yourself why you're including whats in the frame. Also ask yourself what your subject is, and if its actually interesting.
Night shots are challenging. Good effort.
Thanks I will keep all that in mind for the next shoot. Ya 6 is boring but just liked the lighting effects on the address so I took a few shots to see what I could do with it.