im no wedding photog but ill give you some c&c
1. I like the idea you were going for, but i feel her skin is a bit blown, specially her arm which looks a different tone than the rest of her.
2. Shooting towards a window with such bright light is not a good idea, as you can see this shot is blown also and a lot of detail is lost at the top of the bouquets
3. her expression is very nice and natural, however the image seems a bit soft and the tilt doesnt do it for me here...thats personal preference though.
4. once again seems a bit soft.
5. i like this one, but still very over exposed.
6. my favorite...picture is perfect as is.
7. not the most flattering angle for the grrom, also the crop is odd, a bit too much negative space up top.
8. flirty...lol i like this one!