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Aug 28, 2010 01:01 |  #1

Hi @ all

Haven't posted here for a while, would like CC on 2 pictures
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Aug 28, 2010 09:24 |  #2

The only critiscism is that the horizons in both are very slightly out. Otherwise excellent captures.


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Aug 28, 2010 10:55 as a reply to  @ corkneyfonz's post |  #3

Hi Jim, first one for me.love the composition and the contrast.thr second, while having great light, the boat is too blurred for me.


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Aug 28, 2010 13:33 |  #4

Corkneyfontz, Thanks for your CC, i think in time & practise i will learn how to pay attention to those details you mentioned

Hi Flo, I was so happy with the light but did not see the boat is indeed blurry Thanks !

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Aug 28, 2010 13:54 |  #5

the first photo works best for me, Jim.. aside from the fact I'm an avid bw player, i think the first photo tells more stories and character than the second (which is a pretty photo, no doubt. but that's it; pretty). i hope i don't sound too know-it-all, just sharing my thoughts


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Aug 28, 2010 16:18 |  #6

1st one is beautiful Jim. Love it! The second is also nice and you really have to look hard to be turned off by boat, imo. Good shootin.


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Aug 29, 2010 01:56 |  #7

Aditya Rakhman & chomish
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