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Trip to the County Fair, C+C please...

 
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Aug 29, 2010 14:56 |  #1

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Thanks in advance for your thoughtful comments and criticism...

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Aug 29, 2010 16:11 |  #2

3 and 4 stand out. 5 is precious.

Like photography should be "If a scene is dark, it should be dark".
I think its funny how many people try to call out underexposure. For the evening, you absolutely nailed it.




  
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Aug 29, 2010 18:40 |  #3

Corn dogs..?


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Aug 29, 2010 18:43 |  #4

#5 is nice but the rest just look like snapshots


I know, right? I'm just sayin'...

  
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Aug 29, 2010 18:51 |  #5

Last one is quite delightful.


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Aug 29, 2010 21:07 |  #6

Rivest wrote in post #10812728 (external link)
Corn dogs..?

Had one... mustard and ketchup, but got into it and forgot to get the shot! Ha!

Viva-photography wrote:
3 and 4 stand out. 5 is precious.

Like photography should be "If a scene is dark, it should be dark".
I think its funny how many people try to call out underexposure. For the evening, you absolutely nailed it.

Thanks! I appreciate that!

corkenyfonz wrote:
Last one is quite delightful.

Thanks! She doesn't usually sleep that peacefully...

focus.pocus wrote:
#5 is nice but the rest just look like snapshots

thanks... but REALLY? Snapshots? The lighting conditions were unreal..no flash, just me and my cheapo 28 1.8... so if you don't have any real criticism just skip it. -no hard feelings just looking for something real from some people that have the experience.


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Aug 29, 2010 21:19 |  #7

Hmmm isn't it hot dog..?


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Aug 29, 2010 21:25 |  #8

Rivest, wikipdia is your friend :D http://en.wikipedia.or​g/wiki/Corn_dog (external link)

I LOVE #5, so gorgeous! Theres something about #1, while its a great shot it still seems kinda distracting too me with all the moving lights. I look at it feeling like I have vertigo. But at the same rate, I love it too :)

#4 is great, but it needs to be lightened up a bit, it gives a gloomy feel but it should be giving off a happy vibe, yknow what I mean?

#3 is captured the feeling of the fair brilliantly, I love it. It makes me want to go for a ride :D

I don't really like #2, not because it's bad per se, but it doesnt really grab me, its more like a standard happy snap photo. Technique wise it looks wonderful, but hmmm, maybe it's not interesting enough?

Remember I'm only learning myself though, so take the advice with a grain of salt lol


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Aug 29, 2010 21:27 |  #9

Rivest wrote in post #10813485 (external link)
Hmmm isn't it hot dog..?

oh okay... you aren't familiar with CORN DOGS... they are hot dogs on a stick, dipped in corn meal batter and the deep fried...

Almost everything you can eat at a county fair has been deep fried... twinkies, oreos, snickers bars, pickles, and so on.


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Aug 29, 2010 21:34 |  #10

number 2 says country fair to me, I like them all but I think number 4 could have been better with a lower perspective. hope this helps.


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Aug 30, 2010 09:14 as a reply to  @ CalebG's post |  #11

3,4 with 5 as the winner for me.tells the story without words.


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Aug 30, 2010 14:05 |  #12

#5 is the best to me. the composition is great.




  
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