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Aug 30, 2010 11:13 |  #1

Please let me know what you all think. I am very new. I have been editing for only about a month. I mess around with Lightroom 2. Please let me know what I can improve on (I am sure a lot since I am very new). Thank you all very much.

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Aug 30, 2010 15:11 |  #2

Nothin?


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Aug 30, 2010 15:57 |  #3
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I like them, great photos

On the second one, tips: perhaps use less contrast, and don't cut out the top of his head?


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Aug 30, 2010 16:09 as a reply to  @ LuisArturo's post |  #4

I'll try. I like them. Too many of us - me included - tend to take baby pictures looking down on them You have nicely avoided that. Great angle on the shots. #2 has quite a bit too much contrast added, and I am going to guess a bit too much softening of the skin in #1 (the eyes are still very sharp so it doesn't seem out of focus). Good job.

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Aug 30, 2010 16:23 |  #5

Thank you all for the feedback. In #1 I didnt soften the skin in any way from what I remember haha. #2 I was going for that look but also thought the contrast might have been too overkill. Thanks again. Keep the CC coming please. :)


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Aug 30, 2010 16:42 as a reply to  @ LuisArturo's post |  #6

First is sweet...second is a great photo.without all that contrast and PP done?Once you lose the details in the eyes, the effect loses its appeal.
Third is also a cute candid.


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Aug 30, 2010 16:45 |  #7

Yah I wanted to try out all the PP but I guess it is not a hit. haha. Thanks!


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Aug 30, 2010 17:01 |  #8

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Yah I wanted to try out all the PP but I guess it is not a hit. haha. Thanks!

I know I have done it many mnay times...lol..but I keep those for myself:lol:


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Aug 30, 2010 18:29 |  #9

HaHa i will keep that in mind next time. :)


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