macobee Goldmember  1,843 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2006 Location: Hong Kong More info | Aug 30, 2010 11:28 | #1 havent posted in the critique section since a long time.....and before we start i know i forgot to wipe the dust of the little black plates.....hiting myself with a brick now for that, other then that pls critique away and let me know what you think. 
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Aug 30, 2010 12:35 | #2 Hi Marco!!! I love the colors and textures in these, the first really shows the range of colors and ingredients.really lovely. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Aug 30, 2010 12:40 | #3  PermanentlyIMO spot the dust ... the exposure is excellent ... the compositions are busy but well organized ... in #1 I would crop the paddle at the top to reinforce the crop on the right and the additional bit that gets cropped isn't adding that much to the scene. In general I spend a lot of time evaluating where to crop elements in a frame at the frame edges. Notice in #2 that the candle is touching the edge of the frame. It's not likely a real problem to most viewers but when it comes to pushing elements off frame (by cropping) I can only state that it will matter to someone, particularly if an art director is involved.
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drumnut01 Senior Member 415 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 More info | Aug 30, 2010 23:04 | #4 These are really a little busy for my taste. My eyes just keep wandering around trying to find a strong subject.
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nüborn Senior Member  263 posts Joined May 2010 Location: Toronto, On, Canada More info | Aug 31, 2010 13:55 | #5 Too busy and don't know what to look at... but darn does it look delicious! You pictured the food in a delicious way! My Gear : XSi, 10-22, 18-55 MkII, 55-250, YN-468
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Aug 31, 2010 20:55 | #6 Thanks for your co http://www.flickr.com/photos/marcoveringa/
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PhotosGuy Cream of the Crop, R.I.P.  More info | Sep 01, 2010 10:11 | #7 At first glance these look pretty good, but #1 is so busy that I'm not sure what I should be looking at. I'd crop down into the mushrooms, but that leaves a black hole near the center so I'd probably wind up rearranging the whole set-up. FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
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Sep 01, 2010 10:17 | #8 I think its an asian thing.....if asians see this they right away see moon cakes.......i think, but i understand what you say all .....I will try again with the same and do a more wider set up....more space, and a clearer subject http://www.flickr.com/photos/marcoveringa/
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | In the first one I see mooncakes right away, nothing clutters the subject for me. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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