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Aug 31, 2010 07:39 |  #1

deleted, I'm finished with POTN...




  
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Aug 31, 2010 07:52 |  #2

lightning - great
ballance - nice
face expressions - none.

she looks kinda bored or 'not there'.


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Aug 31, 2010 09:36 |  #3

Great technical details. Wish she would have smiled and used different expressions


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Aug 31, 2010 09:39 |  #4

I have to agree with trancerem.... almost like are we done yet.....baseball cap is the better of them




  
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Aug 31, 2010 10:05 |  #5

Agree with the above. Love the look and feel of all of these! How are you triggering the flash?


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Aug 31, 2010 12:01 |  #6

Great shots, all of them are well lit. Really like the feel in #1. Definitely try to get her to do more expressions. :)


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Aug 31, 2010 14:46 |  #7

very nice worki like composition in 1




  
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Aug 31, 2010 18:55 |  #8

Thanks for the feedback. The expressions are a little my fault. I am not big on big cheasy smiles, so I have only edited the "serious looks" thus far. The Flash is triggered by Cactus "Ebay" Triggers. Guess I need to run through and work some of the smiles (:




  
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Aug 31, 2010 19:37 |  #9

Nice execution. I agree about the smiles, but I guess you haven't put them up yet.




  
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Aug 31, 2010 20:22 |  #10

Hey Guys. i don't think smiles are alway needed..

most seniors would rather go for the attitude look than smiles..

OP wonderful light. you short lighted her on every shot..

great posing too..

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Sep 01, 2010 05:11 |  #11

i like her smile because it's her personality. it comes through in the pictures and makes them that much more interesting (to me, at least). kind of mysterious.


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Sep 01, 2010 05:42 as a reply to  @ MidnightRook's post |  #12

nice work here. Like them all. as for the smiles, i try to get the girls to give me an attitude shot and a mom shot on every pose,,,keeps peace in the family. Like the short lighting on her as well.. nice job:cool:


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Sep 01, 2010 08:46 |  #13

Very well done! #4 is a real killer; color, composition, lighting and PP. Great work!


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