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Sep 01, 2010 11:55 |  #1

anything I can do better? C&C welcome

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Sep 01, 2010 11:59 |  #2
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Nice.
I would use camera raw to enhance clarity and vibrance.
Also a bit on saturation and maybe a bit more color with masking at the spray.
Make it POP !!


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Sep 01, 2010 13:49 |  #3

I agree with EL_PIC. I'd also try bring out the rainbow in the waterfall. A touch more shaprpness would not hurt either.


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Sep 01, 2010 13:57 as a reply to  @ GorgeShooter's post |  #4

A CPL could have helped enhance the colors in the rainbow a bit more. As the others have said, I'd also try bringing up contrast, clarity and a small bit of vibrance to bring things out a bit.

It definitely gave me a "Wow" moment, though when I clicked in :) Nice shot of the falls.


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Sep 01, 2010 14:07 as a reply to  @ Snydremark's post |  #5

Very beautiful!


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Sep 01, 2010 14:21 |  #6

Great pic. I took one very similar last weekend.


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Sep 01, 2010 15:24 |  #7

I enabled image editing, anyone want to have a go at it?




  
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Sep 01, 2010 15:26 |  #8

Wake up earlier in the morning ;-)a (If possible!)


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Sep 01, 2010 15:55 |  #9

Will. Great shot anyway. I love it. You are very talented


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Sep 01, 2010 17:45 as a reply to  @ ChristopherJ1968's post |  #10

I thought I'd give your image "a go at it" by increasing contrast and upping vibrance a bit. I also did a little burning for the rainbow. I left the image a little on the dark side to appear to be earlier/later in the day.


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Sep 01, 2010 19:03 |  #11

Very nicely captured.


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Sep 02, 2010 11:14 |  #12

photographicd wrote in post #10831377 (external link)
Wake up earlier in the morning ;-)a (If possible!)

The rainbow appears at the falls between 0930 and 0945, I wanted that shot. Getting up early is not the problem I was up at 0530 the day before looking for wolves....

My post processing skills are not the greatest, however I just want to picture to look how it did that morning, I don't want it to look over processed or fake.




  
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Sep 03, 2010 11:13 |  #13

I like the last edit. Well done.


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Sep 03, 2010 23:23 |  #14

Just played around a bit.


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Sep 10, 2010 16:52 |  #15

Ok what about this edit?

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